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Freedom

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Bright sun come here, and kiss my cheek
Thow me overboard and make me weak
Deeper, deeper, plummet to the sea
I'm sinking, finally, now I'm home free
when i wrote this, i kept thinking of a fish that had been caught, and the sun was starting to dry it up, but as soon as the hook is out of the fish's outh, he returns to his hime; the sea
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I always think of this when me and my family goes fishing. They must be happy to get home, right? :heart:

Again, great imagery! :D